Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Oh Winters Flake Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh winters flake
Blown by the wind
So all alone
Until you find a friend
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Brian Kilpatrick
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Naila Rais 02 May 2018

A lovely poem... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too. Naila

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Bee. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 January 2017

Exotic wintry poem poetically presented. Very enjoyable for me to read of from a hot country. Great wording and imagery wow! ! Kudos. U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too titled, 'pay a visit to a riverbank, pls do

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 March 2016

Sweet drop! ! Loved the flow and rhyme too.

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Roseann Shawiak 07 February 2016

Love the imagery in this poem, how one flake finds a friend then soon many hide the fields and blanket trees, it makes for a beautiful picture of a winter landscape in my mind. Great poem, I enjoyed it very much.10+++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Clarence Prince 06 February 2016

Blown by the wind so all alone until you find a friend... Oh, that's nice!

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