Where did you go, my dear, my day;
Where, oh where, did you go?
To market, to maker of market, to say
Too much of the little I know.
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My dear...where are you going! My day...where are you going! Nice depiction....
Since we can only write/respond very short, so I must add this: Congratulations withe accolade Modern Poem Of The Day. Most deserving!
Indeed Time FLIES if we wanna do so many things, BUT in such a time you have done so many things, this we can read in your BIO,5 Stars and to My Favourites. Enjoyed this admirable poem
My dear, my day! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Time is like the flow of a river- always on the go. Nicely portrayed. Where did you go, my life, my own, Decades gone in a wink?
Some things are better left unknown Some thoughts too thick to think.
What a beautiful expression on fleeting time. Seconds, minutes, hours, days pass by with the wink of eyes. It is touching when the poet says 'Where did you go, my dear, my year; Why did you flee from me? I went from here to there to here Loitering breathlessly.' Nice poetry. Loved it.10+++++
Some thoughts too think to think........some time all we are left with amazement! Enjoyed your creative poem on on some very subtle thoughts. Thanks for sharing and congratulations!
Time does fly too quickly and there are still experiences left to live.Thank you for this wonderful poem..
Some things are better left unknown Some thoughts too thick to think...., Loved these lines. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for bening selected as the poem of the day.
Some things are better left unknown Some thoughts too thick to think Yes things better left unknown saves often. Nice poem poet. Thanks for sharing it. 10
Excellent- -excellent- -excellent! ! ! ! ! Would that I could write so elegantly and so simply!
Some things are better left unknown Some thoughts too thick to think. Nice line from a lovely poem. 10
Where did you go? Where did go my dear....so tender so lovely! Loved the poet's style of expression!