Thursday, September 13, 2007

Oh What A Mess On My Desk. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

what i found on my desk
was nothing to be impressed:
A ripe peach with a ugly bruise,
a pair of stinky tennis shoes,
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kirilee S..
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Ana Monnar 13 September 2007

LOL your poem is hilarious. You sound like Dr. Seuss. This would make an excellent illustrated book for children. There is an illustrator that could capture your words and exagerate them. Fantastic job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A big 10.

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