Oh What A Joke Comments

Vera, this could be pretty good, but it really needs to be developed much further. go our own separate WAYS? Did you mean to end on that adjective? If you could work some vivid images into the poem, it would help. You also might benefit from reading LOTS of good contemporary poetry in English (Billy Collins, Mary Oliver) . If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know you like it. Yrs, JC