Oh What A Joke Poem by Vera Sidhwa

Oh What A Joke



Oh What a Joke

Oh what a joke that you like me
And we like each other.
We never fight or quarrel too.
But then why do we want to go our own separate.

Tuesday, May 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: joke
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 30 May 2017

Vera, this could be pretty good, but it really needs to be developed much further. go our own separate WAYS? Did you mean to end on that adjective? If you could work some vivid images into the poem, it would help. You also might benefit from reading LOTS of good contemporary poetry in English (Billy Collins, Mary Oliver) . If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know you like it. Yrs, JC

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