Saturday, December 13, 2014

Oh Water Comments

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I felt the placid water,
In the palm of my hand.
It made me want to drink it,
But the beauty at hand,
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Vera Sidhwa
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Sina Farajzadeh 16 December 2014

Hi. I read your work. Well, rain is beautiful. So many people believe so, but when it rains they don't walk through it. They hide under an umbrella! Oh, contradictory people! Paradoxical actions! ! I think we both share common feelings about nature... My poem 'Modern Life' may satisfy your mind in this case. I'd be glad to know your comments and ideas on it. Good luck.

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