Monday, May 5, 2008

Oh Tonight Comments

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Oh tonight I still adore you by the flairs
day’s sweating has transpired yet
almost desiccated by the thirst of summer
the clock still tickles on the wall
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Dr subhendu kar
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Louie Limosani 06 June 2008

This is a great poem Dr Kar I love the intelligent use of words and the pictures you paint with you're poems. Louie

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Rani Turton 05 May 2008

This is truly an amazing poem. Such lush imagery and rich lines. Thanks for it and continue getting that sublime inspiration!

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Emancipation Planz 05 May 2008

How thoughtful of you Subham... 'I do remember you since early hours waked up by the dew over the green'.... green is such a special colour isn't it when it comes to that flairy pen of yours? ? ? ?

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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