Thursday, April 24, 2008

Oh The Whisper Comments

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oh what a lovely rhythm and rhyme
I saw her by the sea side after a long time
moon when shadowed by the clouds
day as dark gray seemingly listless
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Edwin Baldwin 15 July 2012

It’s amazing how many emotions can be suddenly conjured up from a deep sleep, and brought back to life, new life, from seeing an old flame. It truly is an energizing feeling to say the least. Thanks for commenting on my work …

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Edwin Baldwin 15 July 2012

It’s amazing how many emotions can be suddenly conjured up from a deep sleep, and brought back to life, new life, from seeing an old flame. It truly is an energizing feeling to say the least. Thanks for commenting on my work …

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Abha Sharma 24 April 2008

Your whisper heard by the moon Your blood renewed in its own room Her warmth when entwined your heart A new life with all emotions start…. Delightfully composed spreading the serene flames of poetic flair…

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Broken Peaces 24 April 2008

All is tranquil down at the waters edge, a peaceful chant from a gifted pen 10 Chris

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