Saturday, June 13, 2020

Oh The Stealing Steps... Comments

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Oh the stealing steps
Never know where it go
But often steal and go
All the very golden trow
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Varsha M
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Anil Kumar Panda 13 June 2020

The reality of life and death is vividly captured. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Varsha M 13 June 2020

Thank-you sir for admiring my work. Thank-you so much.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 June 2020

Time The amazing thief of age Time Amazingly makes another sphere of life Time Indicator of the staircase to pass this life Time Shows all but stealing steps in mind leaves not inner strife

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Varsha M 13 June 2020

Thank-you so much for such beautiful words. Changing just words transforms scenes. Well written. Admirations Sir. Thank-you for admiring my work.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 June 2020

Wow! A wonderful poem on life and death! Beautifully composed.....10+++

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