Sunday, January 22, 2012

Oh Sweet Darkness Comments

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Oh sweet darkness I stand before you gazing into the black
Wondering if something is there; pouncing; ready to attack
I look into you as you look back with that somewhat soothing stare
Whispering to me 'you can come play with me...if you dare'
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Patrick Villareal
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Dave Walker 22 January 2012

Wow an amazing poem, a really great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Mental Hospital.

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