Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, August 10, 2012

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Oh, son where were you all these years!
I wanted to hear that sweet voice of yours
In this lovely world I missed you for long time
You were not even asking me in prayer times
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

Efe Light Sakpere Ooh, beautiful! Beautiful! Especially dis line: Life might have brought you glory but what a bad end with good start. this is my take sir! Tnx 4 sharing. 7 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2012

Uday R. Kulka.. Maatru Devo Bhavah! Tanvi, BHULO BHALE BIJU BADHU MA BAP NE BHULSO NHI

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2012

« Delete » merlyn d ah, hasmukh, you hit the nerve of a mother's heart oh to think of how it is painful to be apart children tend to forget their parents dear but in the end they will come to remember when time has come that we are quite old we feel sensitive and frustrations we hold we long to feel our children's love in return that for many years to them we have borne. but do not be sad, hasmukh smile..hehehe... it is not always a goodbye give them time to realize to remember their mom whom they once idolized..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2012

rekha bhatt VERY LOVELY POEM » ??_tATjAna ?? nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2012

P.G SUNDAR true and excellent words 15 hours ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Somebody tells that children are the enemies of our previous birth! I don't really know. Some of them for sure, do not return love. You observe everything around, and put it in writing. Really exciting U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala Aug 11,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Abdul Wahab nice! 49 minutes ago · Like Heather Burns thoughtful writing 10 minutes ago · Like Tribhawan Kaul Most of the abondoned mother or mothers(parents) who have been left to fend for themselves will relate with this poem. What may come, mother's love will remain unadultrated for her children. Nice poem. :) 49 minutes ago · Like Deletejadia4708au Zeeshan Zee very nice 54 seconds ago · Like a great write coming from the heart rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai Aug 11,2012 Uwa Idris wow very touching. i like this.21 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Abdul Wahab nice! 49 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Heather Burns thoughtful writing 10 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Heather Burns thoughtful writing 10 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

James Lee Jobe That's wonderful, Sir! 3 minutes ago ·

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

toomuch really nice good to read

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Oh, son where were you all these years! I wanted to hear that sweet voice of yours

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