Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Oh So Sad Comments

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our love is a fairy tale
its a dream its not real
if you told the story you'd fail
because no one would know how much i feel
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Jackie Oakden
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this is beautiful your a lot better then you give yourself credit 4: D

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James Mclain 03 June 2009

i am conflicted in this these words u write..may be it is just me, why would one speak to another with out the hope of hand to gain, ..iip.it is just me i am sure..you are a good poet..

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Jackie Oakden

Jackie Oakden

Palm Springs, California
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