Saturday, March 17, 2018

Oh Sky! I Need You Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a closed, cracked room
while sleeping on a deranged bed
and striving hard for inhaling fresh air
Look at my audacity
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manaswini dash
sky
COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 19 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Manaswini. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 March 2018

Look at my audacity I was eager to touch the sky spreading myself from soil to sky...soul's dialogue, bird, fish, do the impossible. touching the sky ohhhhhh that is wonderful poem really touching my soul... liked it very much dear poetess.. tony

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Manaswini Dash 19 March 2018

Thank you Tony for your loving comments. I am glad that you have liked my poem.

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Manaswini Dash 19 March 2018

Thanks Tony

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