Friday, June 6, 2014
Oh Silver Lamps Sparked As I Await You.... Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Chōka form:
As I await you
Painting streaks of sun breaks as
Day shades into a
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Colleen Courtney
09 June 2014
Interesting and greatly enjoyable. Loved that last form and it's beautiful wording.
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Piyush Dey
06 June 2014
it was a delightful read. written in 3 forms, lovely. keep writing. thanks for sharing this one.
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7/27/2025 7:49:29 PM # 1.0.0
delightfully written. three forms nicely done.
Thank to Heather Burns madam for a delightful review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍