Thursday, September 1, 2005

Oh Sea Comments

Rating: 4.9

Oh Sea, why do you deliberately pound the rocks along the bay,
Sending showers of white foam up, in a cascade of spray,
Can you not cease your travels, churning incessantly,
Surging back and forth, always longing to be free.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 21 December 2008

Wonderful work Ernestine, a marvellous poem about the power of the sea. You create such beautiful pictures with your words. Best wishes, Andrew xxx

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Chuck Audette 11 April 2006

It's high tide someone wrote a poem this beautiful about the sea. Nicely done. - chuck

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Emma Johnson 22 March 2006

Your poem is majestic like the sea it describes. Love from Susie.

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Duncan Wyllie 21 March 2006

To realise how closely we are connected to nature and then a sense of peace at the end of this, make it such a worthwhile poem.Love Duncan

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Peter A. Crowther 27 September 2005

This is a splendid hymn to the sea which celebrates its constantly changing moods and power. Good poem.

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