Oh Moon, the shining lantern of the sky!
the brightest light set ablaze in the dark!
glorious boon, heaven freely granted!
committed guardian of the night!
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Thanks for paying such a glowing tribute to the 'the shining lantern of the sky'! 'you stay aloft in the firmament in deep solitude yet in benevolent contact with all creation' - loved the poetic description with appropriate vocabulary.
I'm transported right to the balcony scene in Romeo and Juliet. An absolutely beautiful poem, Valsa.
Such a beautiful poem on the Moon, dear Poetess Valsa. We, the classical dancers, portray the moon with mudras almost in all dances that we perform but as yet, i have never been able to write a verse on the moon. You have penned it with perfection. Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem....10
Your poems really shower moon light on the path of readers who trtead in darkness.It is ecstatic to see a glowing full moon. Thanks for sharing....10
The queen sky has brought up light of inner happiness. You have nicely captured its imagery and I am astonished the way you have described. Thank you for writing...10++
The beginning line which is inscribed as 'Moon is the shining lantern of the sky' attracts the readers to go through this poem. Moon is beautiful creation of God. It appears each night to lead the wayfarers. Young and the old persons fall under its mesmerizing spell. The inspiration you have made is so touching and attractive. Enjoyed for second time.
Wow Valsa this so delighted my lunarlover heart, such a beautiful glowing tribute to the moon. The moon is mesmerising just like you portray so admiringly and poetically. Kudos my friend. Plz Pleez do comment my newest poem too titled, ' pink mania inking'
Your poems always make me spellbound. Let me quote from the lovely poem on moon- you appear each night to lead the wayfarers, stumbling across the murky faraway streets, the ones lost in the labyrinth of darkness shedding down beams of light on their way you stay aloft in the firmament in deep solitude yet in benevolent contact with all creation
congrats for your pem and being now 417/500 poets well desrved ma'am and thanks for your comment '' Continue to be a maestro.....! Best Wishes, dear Poets' poet! ''''thn qqqqqqqqqqq
hey, valsa! you make me think of a song i've been singing to myself for a few weeks now. i'll send you a link by the ph email. -glen
you appear each night to lead the wayfarers, /stumbling across the murky faraway streets, /the ones lost in the labyrinth of darkness /shedding down beams of light on their way - - -> Valsa, you write such beauty into your lines! ! ! I feel these lines physically, emotionally, and spiritually o Reigning Queen of Poem Hunter! ! ! ! 10++
In God's creation nothing is more charming or mesmerizing the queen of sky. Watching it in her varied shapes through her cycle of days has such a calming effect. Thanks for the lovely ode to moon.
Thank you SAvita for your beautiful comment! Indeed Moon is a magnificent creation of God!
Moon over the world so beautiful and free I wonder what you think of me? .....well penned.
I find moon an d night both in interesting state of reflection. Beauty is caught in hand. Queen of sky is smiling in bright hope. Thank you!
Yes, the Queen of night smiles at everyone! Thank You Budhashya.....
Reigning Queen appears in the sky and improves mind of a visitor. Night queen gains light and this is encouraged with beauty of mind. Every spell mesmerizes mind. This is an interesting poem beautifully penned.10
Thanks a lot Kumaramani sir! Moon is a favourite subjec! t for all poets
as we have controlled small pox and tuberculosis. It may be nature's trick to control the overpopulation. A timely write..... Thanks ma'am Man has used all his mind and brains so far I am sure he will continue We have come by so many eons this also will pass on that's why I composed my poem use your Brains did you get to read it poetess
Queen of sky appears as moon at night and and queen of day as sun. Your observation gives us detail of life's perception and you have interestingly written this poem with beautiful image.
Thank you Budhashaya Behera for visiting my page and encouraging me with your beautiful comment!
Great lines insightfully crafted with artistic brilliance. A masterful creation. Thanks for sharing this profound poem with us, Prof. Remain blessed.