Tuesday, December 22, 2015

Oh Please! Comments

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Oh my heart, please don't stop your beat
Oh my eyes, please do not weep
Oh my soul please stay alive
Please help me to gain back life.
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Arfa Kalera
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 January 2016

Oh my self, please let me breath Oh my soul, please let me peep..... .......Into the world of happiness. Away from this world of sadness. such a great wish well expressed to be away from the world of sadness. you are a good poetess. thank you tony

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Arfa Iman Kalera 27 January 2016

its ur greatness, i humbly request to pray for my grade 10 exam i want to get 95%, otherwise i would not be to get admission in good college for math, these r my exam days so very busy in study, but ur love n appreciation always make me happy n relaxed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2015

To live with the muse of your joy in life. Nice work.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 22 December 2015

nicely crafted lines....I like the way u refer to keep away all the negatives in our lives...nicely done...I appreciate you for this...

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Spock The Vegan 22 December 2015

An intriguing poem. Well said about feelings. Thanks for sharing.

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Arfa Kalera

Arfa Kalera

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