Oh peace, where do I find you
I search you everywhere in my country but I could not find you
Oh peace, our countrymen love to have you in their hearts
but now your presence is not there to have a peaceful life.
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the peace shall be in the soul and mind.then we will see peace.but since the souls are full of hatred, and minds full of ignorance and impiousness, there wont be peace.fascinating adroitness you have.keep impressing us. thanks for sharing
an earnest plea...an universal prayer...someday words from poets like you will shatter the walls of greed and help in establishing a world without walls
So accurately portrayed the pain you feel in absence of peace and so beautifully said; there can be no peace with out justice. I believe that is true in peoples personal lives as well as political........ Thank you Ravi........
nice plea for peace, wonderful deep poem, lovely to read...Mari
You expressed your feeling in a frank way..This is really good, I shall say that I don't know where is peace too...I hope the peace would spread in the whole universe :) Good Job...
a very nice theme and message is conveyed in this lovely poem. thanks alot for writing an sharing it with all. take care
A VERY HEART FELT PLEAD TO PEACE...ONE OF MAN'S MOST STUPID INVENTION IS THIS NATION[I FEEL] WHERE ONE CLAIMS TO BE THE SON OF THE SOIL AND THE OTHER IS TREATED AS AN OUT CASTE...VIOLENCE FAILED AND IT WILL CONTINUE TO FAIL...POLITICAL JUSTICE WITH THE KIND OF LEADERS WE HAVE TODAY IS DIFFICULT...THE COMMON PEOPLE SHOULD UNITE PEACEFULLY TO ACHIEVE PEACE IRRESPECTIVE OF LANGUAGE
The strength of your message is only exceeded by your eloquence. May your voice be heard and heeded. Warm regards, Sandra
PEACE is the bull’s eye for all…Utopian fantasy indulgence for poets… consumerist society…aggressively engulfing us…dwarfing one’s need may yield Peace… thanks Sir…for such a great poem…let is wait and watch when our ‘want’ will…halt…! ! 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
very apt and wonderfull poem.particularly from a sensitive poet like you.thanx for sharing voted10 ravi