Monday, July 24, 2006

Oh Paris Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah, to be in Paris in the rain
The tower dripping wet
The pavement like moist sheets
Beneath our bodies
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Jeff Hobbs
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Wow! So lovely! It is as if Paris just rose before my eyes. Loved it, dear poet.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 02 August 2006

That was a great poem, great work. Rissa

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Padraic O' Reilly 24 July 2006

Really sensory, makes me wish I was in Paris. This is a great piece of writing. Thanks.

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Jeff Hobbs

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