Oh Pain Comments

You have greatly captured a moment of every day in my life. Nicely done.

the ever-reappearing story of struggle and depression...my classmates and i are currently studying self-esteem in health class, and this is an great example of how personal (and other) preferences can negatively affect one's self-esteem... lc

This is something that everyone can relate to. You've done well in capturing your audience :)

We all experience pain, physical or psychological. I loved the last paragraph.10/10.

...followed by woes.... CP

entrapped to the cell of struggle...of course its painful..well implied write..

The pain of pain is so painfull. Painfully profound!