Oh, night when Heaven breached the dark
it's beauty I could not contain
Forever it has changed my heart
the wonder of it still remains
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A great Pantoum Chris..reads effortlessly but I know how complex this can be to sustain the rhythm and the meaning..excellent and a wonderful read...a well deserving 10.... Lodigiana
When heaven breached the dark it's beauty that we cannot contain but this mesmerizes mind through vision and perception. Such splendor granted to behold within soul with light of wisdom is fortune gifted by God with grace. A nice imagery is presented with philosophic perspectives. This poem is excellent...10
It's light now shines within my soul now greater love my heart reveals- beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it.10