Monday, April 9, 2018

Oh, Night When Heaven Breached The Dark Comments

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Oh, night when Heaven breached the dark
it's beauty I could not contain
Forever it has changed my heart
the wonder of it still remains
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Chris Embrick
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Marieta Maglas 09 April 2018

It's light now shines within my soul now greater love my heart reveals- beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it.10

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Lodigiana Poetess 09 April 2018

A great Pantoum Chris..reads effortlessly but I know how complex this can be to sustain the rhythm and the meaning..excellent and a wonderful read...a well deserving 10.... Lodigiana

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

When heaven breached the dark it's beauty that we cannot contain but this mesmerizes mind through vision and perception. Such splendor granted to behold within soul with light of wisdom is fortune gifted by God with grace. A nice imagery is presented with philosophic perspectives. This poem is excellent...10

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