Tuesday, April 27, 2021

Oh My Sorrow (Ghazal) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh my shadow, you are like my sorrow
Leaving me not alone to rest in peace

Oh my shadow you're dark like my sorrow
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Indira Renganathan
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me poet yeps poet 02 May 2021

Oh my shadow don't you try to follow For my sun's not here, I am without peace

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M Asim Nehal 28 April 2021

Heartfelt ghazal. Nicely composed Madam Indiraji. Much appreciated.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 April 2021

A poignant and discerning write in a wonderful poetic style. Well written.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2021

A wonderful ode to sorrow! Extremely well written Ghazal with mind's puzzle..5 atars

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