Monday, May 9, 2016

Oh My Love-3 Comments

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Hey dear..
Do you hear?
I am here on this shore
Separated by the Ocean
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Priya 24 October 2018

Your ability to make oceans of tear born of separation of love has saddened me a lot. kindly put some tears into a bud and make cherry blossoms of love.

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Kshirod Kumar Dehury 02 December 2017

I am hear on this shore Separated by the Ocean ........................................... ............................................ ............................................... .................................................. I am here on this shore Awaiting, your sole lover. lovely poem sir, i like these line of your poem sir,10++++

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Sabita Sahoo 11 June 2016

am here on this shore Separated by the Ocean Of this lover's tear.. Delinked by the lake Of torturing silence, Fragmented, disillusioned, tired As I am, Still hope you'd ferry Back to me, this world, In the ship just to abode. A great poem of love. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 21 May 2016

I am here on this shore Separated by the Ocean Of this lover's tear.. Delinked by the lake Of torturing silence, Fragmented, disillusioned, tired As I am, Still hope you'd ferry Back to me, this world, In the ship just to abode.. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 20 May 2016

Do you hear? I am here on this shore Separated by the Ocean Of this lover's tear.. Delinked by the lake Of torturing silence, Fragmented, disillusioned, tired As I am, Still hope you'd ferry Back to me, this world, In the ship just to abode.. Beautiful work. Amazing lines. Thanks for the poem.

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Asit Kumar Dhir 14 May 2016

I am here on this shore Separated by the Ocean Of this lover's tear.. Delinked by the lake Of torturing silence, Fragmented, disillusioned, tired As I am, Still hope you'd ferry Back to me, this world, In the ship just to abode.. Beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 May 2016

I am here on this shore Separated by the Ocean Of this lover's tear.. Delinked by the lake Of torturing silence, Fragmented, disillusioned, tired As I am, Still hope you'd ferry Back to me, this world, In the ship just to abode.. I like these lines of your poem Sir. Thanks for sharing it.10 for it. Seema Devi

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