Oh my love
I see you so near
But our love
Can never be
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Very good love. I reguest you to read my new poems and comments and rate. Thanks.
Dave Walker Excellent Love poem, Dave...short and sweet love poem. I just love it....so meaningful love and sad message.
great poem my friend! ! ! ! 'i can't be without you' those words, , , , ,
'God let us be To love who we love Can't you see It was meant to be '...like that!
A very good poem exposing one negative effect of racism. Very natural, passionate and high degree of sandness. Very good. BRAVOOOOO......!
Forbidden love, the theme of many centuries, and a reoccurring phrase in beautiful poems, like this one.
Very well drafted scenaries so serene of unrequited love and a spin a yearn attitude of love is felt within.Love is like a horse here which you can ride until the end of the riverbed but perhaps nobody can make the horse drink water.Its upto the horse then to decide. Your poetry is truly overwhelming Sir and thanks for sharing it with rookies like me.Impeccable write..
Good job, keep up the good work. 'can't you see, it was meant to be' But maybe that's what our dreams are fore.
This is Great, crappy times of segregation it seems of two people, sorry my friend.. Good Write..