Friday, August 12, 2011

Oh My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh my love
I see you so near
But our love
Can never be
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Dave Alan Walker
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Oscar Robles 02 August 2013

This is Great, crappy times of segregation it seems of two people, sorry my friend.. Good Write..

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Gajanan Mishra 29 July 2012

Very good love. I reguest you to read my new poems and comments and rate. Thanks.

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Goblin Train 30 January 2012

this one left me in tears. Way too close to home!

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Lawrence H 13 January 2012

Dave Walker Excellent Love poem, Dave...short and sweet love poem. I just love it....so meaningful love and sad message.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 November 2011

great poem my friend! ! ! ! 'i can't be without you' those words, , , , ,

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Eric Mwenda 11 November 2011

Its a pity she died.its a nice poem.i like it

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Minu Alex 16 October 2011

'God let us be To love who we love Can't you see It was meant to be '...like that!

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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 09 October 2011

A very good poem exposing one negative effect of racism. Very natural, passionate and high degree of sandness. Very good. BRAVOOOOO......!

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

Forbidden love, the theme of many centuries, and a reoccurring phrase in beautiful poems, like this one.

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 September 2011

Very well drafted scenaries so serene of unrequited love and a spin a yearn attitude of love is felt within.Love is like a horse here which you can ride until the end of the riverbed but perhaps nobody can make the horse drink water.Its upto the horse then to decide. Your poetry is truly overwhelming Sir and thanks for sharing it with rookies like me.Impeccable write..

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Poet Of The River 25 August 2011

Good job, keep up the good work. 'can't you see, it was meant to be' But maybe that's what our dreams are fore.

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