Oh My Love! ! ! ! Comments

'And let the whole universe around us Slowly melt down into nothingness' Excellent! ! excellent! ! lovers are almost insane in their 'togetherness'

Enthralling piece Sathya....romantic, original and exudes a sense of continuity...all packed in beautiful stanzas...Undoubtedly a 10++++

excellent poem, this kind of eternity is highly and very original suggested............10++++++++++

love devotional...the first stanza lines i most liked...more sentiments sweetness i find there...10

So sweet...thoughts are so heart-warming Words are breathtakingly romantic flowing with the beauty of your words and an expression of great love and adoration... an assurance of lifetime commitment... romantic and with passion... a little bit sensual... a poems that speaks of a versatile You... thanks for sharing this superb write, Sir 10++++++ Lovelots, Maia

Wowww.. How wonderful is to read this poem sir.. Very romantic indeed.. I love reading these kind of poems..Not only does this poem reflect your poetic expertise, but also shows that you are man with a great heart..This seems to have come from the core of your heart.. regards Shan

sathya sir.....very romantic and passionate.....a great pleasure to read this one..10

when you become I and I you And the whole universe around us Slowly melts down into nothingness A very romantic poem Sathya....lovely write 10

when you become I and I you WONDER IF IT WOULD BE BETTER WITHOUT THESE WORDS...