Oh My Lord Comments

Line 7 says ' which poison did I thou take? I thought this was a mistake not until i saw line 11 say ' oh my lord I thou said'. I can't imagine it right for these pronouns I AND THOU walking together in these lines! What is the brain behind this? I am asking because perphaps the poet would know better! But that dispite that, this is a nice write

Hmm that we call sleeping, you are flying in the dream not in earth not yet in heaven so go anywhere you want, once your soul back to your body bring back all spirit in you and wake up to live in real life, nice write friend_Unwritten Soul