Oh! My Garden Comments

A sublime start with a nice poem, Jane. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

a strong sense of longing is well expressed in this lovely little poem. fine writing

'I want to adopt blue flower a profound and peaceful flower Where? should I put it' - A beautiful poem with a beautiful ending.

nostalgic feeling of home... put that blue flower on your chest and enjoy the fragrance while dreaming about home. thanks, i could understand

I have always admired how the lightness in words can bring the heaviness of meaning.Wonderfuly delightful poem about indecision and changes.I gave you a ten.