Up on this beautiful earth
You shower your mercy
When lifting the curtains of darkness
You dazzle the sky in the east
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Up on this beautiful earth You shower your mercy When lifting the curtains of darkness You dazzle the sky in the east... heart touching expression. The beginning is much more interesting to read. Sun is the source of all powers. Beautifully inscribed. Thank u dear madam for posting such a beautiful poem on sun and nature.10
I really like this poem, it is to the point and understandable and written with a passion.
Your face get brighter As you write down your message On the wings of a sweet breeze. Yes Sun writes his message without fail and everyday. And wakes up Earth.. So nice a description Poet. Thank you for Sharing!
A well written poem about the sun, it truly brings so many blessings in our every day life. Simply amazing
I smile at you And say good morning.. when i read these lines, i really smiled with you, you know...... there is so much of innocence in these lines........ shows that you have a pure heart and soul...... thank you....... words of a poet or poetess reveal the inner thoughts and attitudes. thank you dear poetess.
This is a wonderful imageof the sun: yOUR FACE GETS BRIGHTER/AS YOU WRITE YOUR MWSSAGE/ON THE WINGS OFR A SWEET BREEZE. What sensitivity and gratitude you display toward the very siource of our existence. It's so easy to take nature for granted butm you are fully committed to showing the truest regard for Nature. The master poet Rilke claimed that praisiong is thepoet's essentialrole. You havemfulfilled it! And in yourworld of imagery the Sun itselfm is a poet - writing mesages on thewind!
Thank you so much for your valuable comments.I like how you equate the sun with a poet
To your arms so lovely Morning birds sing in your praise I smile at you.................oh wonderful way of expressing light of love by imagery, yet of unique style '''''''''''''''''''''''
Blessings go to the Creator Who gave us life. Nice work.
Yes the Creator bless us with His light.Thank you very much for your comments.
With the coming of the Sun in the east a new day with a new hope is born. Nice drop indeed. Go on spilling ink.
Beautiful. Everyone must follow his instruction also! Thank you, ma'am, for sharing!