Oh My Dear Mom! Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Merlin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

REALLY A GREAT POEM......MOTHER; SHE IS THE SYNONYM OF LOVE....

love this line I fail to express, My love for you With a word of thanks Or a precious gift. All I have with Me I give it to you- wonderful write. good job

Our indebtness to the lady cannot be expressed in words.But your attempt was marvellous, especially calling the womb as our first home.

A very precious work of art. Just the best tribute to a mother a person could ever want to give. Yor even apoligize for causing her the pain of birth But what a rewaed you give to her.......There you are......... Wonderful............. Your sinserety shines Jim Troy

Merlin that is the best tribute to a mom I have ever seem in a poem. I love your sincerety and excitement about coming out..... But you apoligize for any discomfort in your loving way........ Then there you are..... Nothing less than the very highest mark for you young lady....... wonderful work of art......... Jim Troy

The greatness of maa is expressed in beautiful rhymes. Good work.It is heart touching :)

hi merlin, A nice poem, come from deep of your heart. u made me to remember my mom for a while... Thank u

simply wonderful...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !