Oh My Dear Daughter Comments

An endearing poem dear poetess. Lovely expression... loved it

I would love to see you Stand for the truth And save every creature in distress I would love to see you Shine in your souI With kindness..........impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

What a beautiful poem, made up of a parent's wishes that her child's life is richly fulfilling, that the things which characterize it are things of moral value and not materialistic stuff. Which makes me read your poem as a prayer to some higher entity that listens to our expressions of love for others.. Your voice in this poem is so calm and focused, there's no nervous demands, just a quiet but deep joy in your daughter. This is the double effect of poetry: by expressing your feelings so vividly you evoke the same feelings in us.

I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness! Care for your daughter. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

very nice poem. Being a mother of a daughter myself, I completely agree with you on this...

With the wings of love to protect your child. Nice work.

Your poems are so targeted by what you really have to say...so much in so few words.

A touching poem, which can only come from a loving mother! !

This is the prayer of a genuine mother! She wishes her children not merely to grow in material wealth, but in the great wealth of goodness of heart to become a source of joy to everyone around, full of the milk of human kindness! Quite Inspiring!

Very touching and inspiring.. it's said daughters are the shadows of their mothers.. every mother wants their daughters to be perfect in all ways.. the daughters are reflection of all that a mother has or can ever have.. Simple and very effective poem. Thanks for sharing.. :) From a daughter: D

A motherly instinct and deep concern to see every details of her daughter. Great and awesome poem

A motherly instinct and deep concern to see every details of her daughter. Great lovely poem

Great motivating advising poem to yor daughter that all mommies would find inspiring and useful! Kudos fellow indian poetess.

I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness- and the flame may be flamed in your heart to flame in the heart of millions- good penning Bharati Nayak

I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness- and the flame may be flamed in your heart to flame in the heart of millions- good penning