OH, ODESSA!
Years fly and my love
Always stays in my heart,
Floats with me
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This work has a most melodious lyrical smack to it, and i'm likin' it fine...Do you write music? Yes? Go 4 it...Oh, you don't...? ......................................LEARN! lol! Solid workmanship ~FjR~
Very much reminscent of an ode this poem gently moves like a song. Well written.
Very nice poem I recommend to read some poem of Corneille you can deduct about Corneille situation this poem from act 1 scene 1 (je suis Romaine hélas puisqu'Horace est Romain (Horace je her lover) she is from Albe and the is a war between albe and Rome) I can't forget this poem I learn it at school when I was 14nyears old.