Oh My Dadi(Grandma) Comments

I agree with Kelly Kurt. À suggestion....Use apostrophe to form the contraction of it is, like you did with i am. Thanks for sharing. Bri ☺

I missed those golden times! But, there is still hope ahead of you. Nice work.

I am sorry for your loss, Deepanshu. Yes, writing is good therapy and you have expressed your love and sorrow very nicely here. There are some rough parts with your English, but all in all a well written, emotional poem. Keep writing. Peace