Thursday, October 13, 2011

Oh My Child! Comments

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Oh my child, i am waiting for your knock.
in my arms when will you rock.?
i want to hold you close.
want to make you warm when you feel cold.
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Arfa Iris
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Hina Firdose 15 October 2011

Hi! Another lovely beautiful feather to your collection! ! Gud write

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Rishi Menon 14 October 2011

A lovely poem expressed with true feeing and pure emotion. Just as you don't need words to bring home good music, a noble thought is all it takes to craft a masterpiece. Loved it!

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Ace Of Black Hearts 14 October 2011

Another great and inspiring poem.arfa please continue to write them. A mother loving their child. Watch them grow. Knowing one they ill take wings and leave. Raise them right and with prayer of hope they will be alright as their set free. Upon a world in which you adore. They are ready now watch the they explore. The unheard of, the unknown. Enlightenment is born straight of the home.

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Dave Walker 14 October 2011

Another good poem. I will read more of yours.

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Arfa Iris

Arfa Iris

hyderabad, A.P, India.
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