Thursday, November 8, 2018

Oh My Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh my child!
Mummy and Papa love you
Come
Give them your sweet kiss
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Bharati Nayak
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Mahtab Bangalee 22 January 2020

beautifully wrote on the base of advice for child Oh my child, keep trying Never be afraid of failure Success will be yours for sure////

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2018

Oh my child, keep trying Never be afraid of failure Success will be yours for sure......Lovely expression! A motivational piece of work!

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 November 2018

Oh my child, keep trying Never be afraid of failure Success will be yours for sure. Beautiful expression of social behaviour and how we can form and influence the child towars a life of love.. thanku. tony

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Bharati Nayak 22 November 2018

Thank you Dr.Tony Brahmin for your lovely comment on this poem.

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Abhipsa Panda 12 November 2018

How caring a mom is for her child...in your every stanza, you have shown your extreme love and care asking your child to come, along with that, you have taught how to take care of mom and dad, grandmaa and grandpaa and all....Undoubtedly, you are a great poetess mam but along with that you are a great mom too....thanks for sharing this masterpiece mam...

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Bharati Nayak 12 November 2018

Thank you Abhipsa Panda.You lifted my spirit by your lovely comment.Yes, motherhood is not an easy job.But all mothers take care of their children lovingly and willfully out of love.And when there is love in heart, its impact is felt in the surrounding.A child learns every value from the family.It is so important to raise children with love and care and impart right value from a very young age.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2018

Oh dear child of my heart! ! Mother and child. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2018

This poem having so beautiful and didactic reveals love and affection towards children with great advice. All stanzas are impressive and touching, yet the following lines are much intensive. Dear child, your teachers love you Give them your respect Obey their words and do your tasks You will shine bright. Oh my child, keep trying Never be afraid of failure Success will be yours for sure. Thanks you dear madam for sharing this gem with us. Full vote.

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Bharati Nayak 10 November 2018

Thank you so much Sri Kumarmani Mahakul for your valuable opinion.Children are the treasure of asociety.The future of a country depends on them.It is very important that they are loved and cared and also enthused with right values so as to make them good human beings.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 08 November 2018

Most most emotional poem.........I like this poem......

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Bharati Nayak 10 November 2018

Thank you so much Bhagabat Prasad Hotta for reading and liking this poem and your valuable comment.

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