Friday, July 12, 2013

Oh Mother! Comments

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A mother, She is hard to describe,
Cause whatever she does is not bribed.
You can observe her care,
When she cooks your food with her hands bare.
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Chandini Jaswal
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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Chandini.

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Chandini Jaswal 22 November 2019

Thank you sir. Your words of appreciation have motivated me to write more.

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Solomon Senxer 21 November 2019

" Cause whatever she does is not bribed." " She wants it all best" Two among many lines I love... Thank you for describing mother accurately...!

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Chandini Jaswal 22 November 2019

Many thanks for the kind words sir.

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Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Channel 13 September 2019

The poem with ryhming, dedication towards the mother, Confessing the sin, well written poet, thank you poet.

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Chandini Jaswal 15 September 2019

Many a thanks for your kind words sir! Delighted to know that you liked the poem.

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A lovely poem dedicated to your Mother. I like the way you have described her as your guide, philosopher, cook, washerwoman and a critic too.There is no one in this world who can equal the love of a mother. A mother's love is the purest and the most unconditional love. Thank you Chandini. Be blessed.10++

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Chandini Jaswal 27 July 2018

There is no one in this world who can equal the love of a mother. A mother's love is the purest and the most unconditional love. Couldn't have said it better. Thank you ma'am for the kind words

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Anna Osipova 10 April 2017

Great poem! I can see your love to your mother in every word. You have a great mother and she has a great daughter!

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Chandini Jaswal 07 July 2017

Thank you Anna!

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Aradhika Sharma 04 July 2016

Reminds me of that famous quote: If evolution really works, how come mothers only have two hands?

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Chandini Jaswal 15 September 2019

Couldn't have said it better myself! Thank you Aradhika aunty!

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 June 2016

Hi Chandini, Good poem, out of your love for your mother. I invite you to read my poem She Never Had a Sunday expressing same sentiments.

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Chandini Jaswal 01 July 2016

Thank you so much Sir! I will surely read your poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 September 2015

From your rest to your test, From your chest to your vest. Oh mother! Forgive me for all my sins, I liked these lines. it touched me Please forgive me Mum. beautiful and simple and you convey so much of love and adoration for your mother. love your poem thank you

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Chandini Jaswal 01 July 2016

Thank you sir.

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Dave Walker 12 July 2013

A mothers love is the best thing in the world.

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Chandini Jaswal 18 September 2015

There is no doubt about it.

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