Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Oh Mine Papa Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know how important the emotional bond between father and child is,
So so important in the child’s journey in life with dad.
To receive the Shaping of personality,
the forming strength in character, the love for family,
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Patrick A. Martin 17 July 2009

Ken my dad was around but he was a fall down drunk and may as well have been somewhere else A Fond Farewell was deicated to him not about him. Paddy I voted this work a ten. Like you, I wish my dad had been an umbrella or shield my sisters married violent alcoholics and he never protected me from them.

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Marieta Maglas 08 July 2009

the essential expression is' here: ''all these things including teaching the power of Gods love.'' nice narrative poem..10++

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Sandra Fowler 06 April 2009

An eloquent write. But it is your last lines that really resonate. Very poignant and revealing. That little boy who lost his father will never leave the landscapes of your mind.10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ken e Hall

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