Wednesday, October 3, 2012

'Oh Lord How Hard' Comments

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Oh Lord How hard can life sometimes be
Cannot see a way out, just wanting to be set free
Smiling so hard but deep down inside
A need to be honest yet not wanting to take a side
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Lyn Paul
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It reads even better the second time. Such a heart felt prayer that we can all identify with. Well done my friend!

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The real and rabid reality of life is hear eloquently expressed. A powerful prayer and a creative and compelling cry. Well done my dear friend.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

Respecting one another. Thanks for sharing.

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Aung Si 08 October 2012

This is such a great insight into how mindful you are! A smart write and penned mindfully. Love it!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 03 October 2012

Life is a test and everyone wants to prove that they are right! Nice to read..

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Mark Dillon 03 October 2012

The questions remain the same, the answers change each day, Iguess we just have to make our choices as best we can and muddle through, lovely constructive poem Lyn.

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Mark Dillon 03 October 2012

So well constructed Lyn, the question is always the same but the answers vary from day to day, we just have to muddle through it somehow.

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