Oh Lord How hard can life sometimes be
Cannot see a way out, just wanting to be set free
Smiling so hard but deep down inside
A need to be honest yet not wanting to take a side
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The real and rabid reality of life is hear eloquently expressed. A powerful prayer and a creative and compelling cry. Well done my dear friend.
This is such a great insight into how mindful you are! A smart write and penned mindfully. Love it!
Life is a test and everyone wants to prove that they are right! Nice to read..
The questions remain the same, the answers change each day, Iguess we just have to make our choices as best we can and muddle through, lovely constructive poem Lyn.
So well constructed Lyn, the question is always the same but the answers vary from day to day, we just have to muddle through it somehow.
It reads even better the second time. Such a heart felt prayer that we can all identify with. Well done my friend!