Oh Load-Bearers Of Humanity Comments

Oh load-bearers of humanity I wonder how you carry the load so awesome But when I gasp for strength I take refuge in your strength I take refuge in you! it is inner strength and storng desire to stand against..makes us to take refuge and face... lovley poem with strong message....10 read mine...message...welcome.... blood all over.bi tter words

...although the load being weary, I trudge, muddle the puddle, and I seem to come out feeling lighter than air, and knowing how much I am loved.10/10

You must have gotten a lot of strength and energy from the bearers of humanity. Very awesome indeed. Great lines, well thought, deep in meaning in short excellent. A thousand applause to the writer.

very powerful poem great work :) !

A deep write by a deep poet

Great poem, I sometimes wonder how they bear the load, when the virus of evil spreads so easlily. 10++

nice poem.in the life we need someone or something to hang on to in time of need and despair.10+

the last three lines to me say it all but when i gasp for strength i take refuge in your strength i take refuge in you.

How humanity is facing reality of Kali Yuga is well expressed in the poem. Nice to read!

This was great. The thought of being 'That Person' Is mind blowing. To be 'The One' that has to endure it all. It makes you wonder. Great Job.

very powerful poem great work!

Another interesting poem................. Ruth

Great job! Nicely written, it flows well.

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Wonderful piece! Poetry should always carry love and hope! Well Done. 10! Would you please, take a look at my poem ' unconquerable'?

i love this one!

Very deep message! ! I lik :)

tis a good poem, i like it alot

this is a very good poem. It's full of meaning and that's cool

Our thoughts, our views, Our acts, all are the one side we can call it as possitive, but the negative evil side is faster than us so keep vigilant always, react as we can, thanksfor the contemporarily important work,10++