Wednesday, January 9, 2019

Oh Little Bird Comments

Rating: 4.0

Oh little bird I kept you safe
In a cave of branches and leaves
With my love and warmth you grew
Too big for your shell, into two it cracked
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Jennifer Birchall
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Amir Marandi 21 January 2019

Beautiful imagery. Feeling of sadness and loss. Hoping and wishing for a safe and sacred place to stay, but desire to fly to destiny is too strong. Such an excellent portray of emotions.10+++++. Wonderful poem. Don't ever loose your vision.

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Kostas Lagos 09 January 2019

A beautiful poetic presentation of growing up!

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Susheela Shiju 09 January 2019

wow! beautiful! enjoyed reading! 10++

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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