Sunday, November 17, 2013

Oh Listless Maiden In My Garden Comments

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Oh listless maiden in my garden
Wandering aimless on the path,
Cupid himself might ask your pardon
As you trespass on the grass;
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David McLansky
grief aimless
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Elaine Sept 06 December 2013

Wow David this is one of my favourites of yours... such emotion tied into each line. Beautiful and heartbreaking both... xo

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Somanathan Iyer 17 November 2013

A very beautiful romantic poem expressed in soft and solid words. thanks for sharing.

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David McLansky

David McLansky

New York City
David McLansky
David McLansky
New York City
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