Oh Life Comments

Brilliant crafting. Thanks for your ending lines.

My dear poetess Bharati, this is a fabulous poem.....loved it.5 stars

Lovely lines that are loaded with Life and surging with significance!

Keeping our self happy is the way of enjoying the life! Being grateful for that life is ever beautiful. I enjoyed the beat of the writers tone especially in this read for we all are here to share the joy through knowledge share in the form of lovely poems! Thanks for the share dear Ma'am!

... From every down, to every up You make me grow from strength to strength Oh Life I am grateful for you.... And so am I, Bhararti! Thanks for sharing!

I agree with Souren's comment this poem is well-crafted, which is especially important with short poems because that solid structure makes every word count but adding more words to a poorly structured poem does not improve it, just make it heavy. As it appears here, Oh Life is pitch-perfect in tone and ; rich in meaning.. It's a narrow, focused, vivid sie of life. And it functions ike a mirror - refecting our lives bck to ud for indprtion.

Again it is me. Nice piece of work.

Nice poem about the short journey in this life. Thank you Nayak for this great poem.

The poem ends with a positive note. Beautiful poetry.

A wonderful poem Bharti.. Well crafted. Thank you for sharing.

aye jindagi tuney ye kya mang liya mang hi liya to jaa tujhey ye juban diya waisey to tu hi hai bas tu hi hai par phir maut tak tujhey sath rakhney ka faisla kiya............ grrtt penned mam ji

Oh life I am grateful to thee I am grateful to thee. Gratitude towards life and rejoicing in every little beautiful moment is the essence of life. Beautiful poem Bharati.10