Friday, April 26, 2013

Oh Life! ! Comments

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I write my life
In the nights dark canvass
Playing music of silence
I turn to increase the bass
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Yasmin Khan 27 April 2013

very apt use of similes and imagery from music...it ends in a wish to be raised high when; finished with the game'

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Gajanan Mishra 26 April 2013

raising high in life-game. good write. thanks.

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