Thursday, October 30, 2008

Oh If Only Comments

Rating: 4.3

As I slide the knife in
His face seems to grimace
As blood froths at his mouth
And spills to the floor
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Eben S J
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Ruth Walters 22 May 2009

My goodness, you are so clever and imaginative! Really well done....! 10+++++ Come and read some of mine if you like. Ruthy

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Jordan Farrell 30 October 2008

Terrific! Love this poem,10/10!

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