Saturday, September 15, 2012

Oh I'M Sick Comments

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Oh I'm sick, My stomach aches,
I sleep but the pain wakes,
Everybody complains, my parents, my friends,
'Why didn't you take care? ' 's that never ends!
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Sina Farajzadeh
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Eindaray Kyaw 04 October 2012

You immediately wrote down a poem how you felt that day.. This is really fantastic poem Great! I wish may you not be sick again!

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Words' Knight 03 October 2012

This poem is full of hope, power, and well expressed thought. Thank you for.....and well done.

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Nader Baheri 27 September 2012

facinating pal this poem gives me that your pain is not physically but spiritually, just like me.this is the meaning i think you wanted to hide behind the physical pain.right pal? mucha gracias

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 15 September 2012

oh.., hope you get better soon. as i said you are a great poet, you even can say nice poems in this condition. Well done.

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