Oh I'm sick, My stomach aches,
I sleep but the pain wakes,
Everybody complains, my parents, my friends,
'Why didn't you take care? ' 's that never ends!
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This poem is full of hope, power, and well expressed thought. Thank you for.....and well done.
facinating pal this poem gives me that your pain is not physically but spiritually, just like me.this is the meaning i think you wanted to hide behind the physical pain.right pal? mucha gracias
oh.., hope you get better soon. as i said you are a great poet, you even can say nice poems in this condition. Well done.
You immediately wrote down a poem how you felt that day.. This is really fantastic poem Great! I wish may you not be sick again!