Saturday, November 28, 2009

Oh, How The Time Slips Away Comments

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Grey, my hair when we met.
Young men and no men no longer
held their breath when I passed
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Ken E Hall 20 July 2010

Time does slip away but we get wiser and in life its the only way to learn and your poem teaches a lot..love is with us till the end even if we have to make the stars w|ith our hearts+++++++10 see Shan as left his mark....nice fellow regards

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A poem of Love Love is looking for to be loved Sure poets and poetess' are born muser. ‘Love needs to be with you/Will you be with love? Is it soliloquizing with Love to glorify Love …this You in guise Love itself? ‘So when love comes /Try holding on…’ a gala finish and ‘Victory unto Love’ Ma’am ~ ‘May Love find a sanctuary in your sanctuary and shower solace 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Eyan Desir 29 November 2009

An enjoyable read...Well done 10s

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Claude H Oliver Ii 28 November 2009

A powerful emotional punch.

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