Oh! How Silvery Comments

Obina I love the impressions those the clouds draw in the sky. Watching those great drawings is my time pass since my child hood. Now you draw the same thing in this poemhunter what i have been watching in the sky. A beautiful work - I like it very much. Nooruddeen

A silver tapestry woven in delight and sheer pleasure to read. Thank you, superb.

very nice and lovely to read. thanks for sharing.

great poem! ! ! it's amazing keep it up

I love the clouds..a painting of thousand images, colours, shapes, sounds....here I was able to let my thought travel to places with no boundaries......superb!

I don't have anything left to say for others have said it all. Still, I can say that this is Super-Duper Amazing! ! ! ! I give you a 10 but you deserve a million...

It is a privilege to read such eloquent verse. - Will

Obinna you weave a beautiful carpet and I wish nobody steps on and stay aside lifetime by looking its beauty?

Oh! How Silvery the cloud hail, stay, skate, taint, taste, gave, raise, make, played, claim, gauge, and drape vivid as the cape-only Oh how silvery theses words were song in this poem. The images were striking! I enjoyed it from the first to last stanza-the repetition of 'Oh! how silvery' and end rhymes were pleasing to the senses. This is a 10

'Oh! How silvery the clouds raise Their charm full of wonders to blaze With joy that truly does amaze My optics to ascend with praise Of beauty that forms in each phase.' You must have praise for your work, But I can't give you little is left. Others have come and said all the need be. Art like this is truly a master piece.

beautifully woven words......nice write

'Oh! How silvery the clouds skate In the sky which they animate To soundness that sure does inflate To the pleasure of goodness great As tenderness to emanate.' I perticually like this stanza and the one in Kerry O'Connor's comment.

Oh! How silvery the clouds claim The inwardness of beauty's name To set them up alight to flame. If time lets that they stay the same In whiteness where innocence came. This is my favourite stanza. Interesting use of rhyme scheme and repetition in this poem.

Wow! ..What an imagination ya put in ya words in describing the beautiful clouds..... 'Oh! How silvery the clouds pace At motion replete with grace. Light beam from the sun's lustrous face, Touches the clouds thus it does brace Them to imbue perchance the case.' Beautiful! ! ! ! ..Winnie

i bow to your imagination skill and ability in coing words. nice 10 shan

Brilliant description and composition poetic poetry with words rhymes that when read the words leave my mouth then becomes music to my ears......moving me

Nice flow and composition, your abilities to describe are brilliant.

Nice read, end rhymes sound pleasant to the ear.

You did a good job here.It 's beautiful! Lovely flow of words.Love it

It’s an escaped of life....seemingly like a paradise to live...i felt that my heart wish to be there and my soul will live happily ever after....it’s like a dream within a dream...a reality of the mind...'a Happiness in the brink of a dream, the settle in the plateau of reality'...... thank you for sharing and God bless...a 10 +++++