Saturday, February 6, 2016

Oh God! Where Are You Comments

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Oh God where are you?
I am here,
standing on the gates of my house,
I have to lodge a complaint against my grandfather,
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Aarzoo Mehek 09 February 2016

Beautiful and sweet poem and Grandparents are angels guiding their grandchildren towards the right path. So much of love and innocence with this lovely picture of this cutie pie makes this poem complete.10....

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2016

Yes! ! Seeing the works of evil around us today; and, to ask questions. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 06 February 2016

Forgiveness is often more beneficial for the forgiver than the forgiven

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Souren Mondal 06 February 2016

This one is such a sweet and marvellously written poem.. It shows us how our grandparents are always forgiving and loving towards us.. A sweet poem Akhtar sahab.. Thank you for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 06 February 2016

Lovely anecdote involving grandfather and grand daughter translated into a beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. I quote a few lines from where the tiff resolved: The old man with a side glance, watched the granddaughter, smiled and really slept.

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