Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Oh God! 'Do You Still Love Me? ' Comments

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Can you hear my weeping whisper?
Can you feel that it's full of fear?
Oh! Lord! Please take my hand!
I'm too strange to this land!
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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 15 October 2013

Great poem! One thing is that God always loves you. his love is unconditional. He just wants you to love Him as well.

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Patricia Grantham 08 October 2013

Yes God still loves you. He is our Creator and the Sustainer of our lives. You wrote a very humble and emotional poem here. It really touch my soul. He first loved us. Good.

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Thomas Duncky 21 September 2013

'I'm losing the light in this cryptic shade.' nice imagery in that line. nice piece overall, He watches all the land

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Hazel Durham 20 September 2013

God is love he will always love you and help you. A beautiful write!

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Dennis Field 19 September 2013

He will love you till the end of time. Nice poem well written

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Unwritten Soul 18 September 2013

Yes dear, He still.... :) _Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 17 September 2013

The God is puting the ways of salvation in our ways. You are carying the soul of God That is called the holy ghost Look after it. God always will love you

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