Oh Friend Ol' Ben…0307 Comments

Very nice and fluent poem. and thanks a lot for reading my poem.

loveeeeeee it..for a sec i felt like i'm in some kind of a fantasi movie lol that's a gd poem

This poem holds much character and emotion. A good read! ; D

Seen much verdure, autumn shades. To greedy glee, gone gifted glades. Beautiful lines. This composition has been made brilliant with the use of alliteration, imagery metaphor, rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

a very nice to read this poem and these words u chose.

I love the adjectives you have chosen, they create a beautiful image :)