AISWARYA T ANISH

AISWARYA T ANISH

KARUNAGAPPALLY, MANGALAM, KERALA, INDIA
Sunday, February 8, 2009

Oh! Flower, I Feel Sorry For You! ! ! Comments

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I saw a nice little flower…
Enjoying herself in the nice warm fields…
The place felt fine, what a beautiful sight! !
Why didn't it come yesterday? !
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Sethu 09 April 2018

So good Aiswarya

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

Why do we hurt these little things, who give us joy? ? They are the ones who blooms happiness to the world Aren’t we too bound to be blossomed into flowers of happiness? ? ? beautiful dear poetess. so young as you are, you lift up your mind into the world lofty thoughts........ how true are your words..... beauty is God... tony

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chakkachula 16 November 2017

Sreebhoovilasthira angottu english aakiyo?

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Sangeetha Biju 23 June 2011

Nice one, Aiswarya! Keep up the good work!

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Haa pushpame...athika tunga padathiletra shobhichirunnatayi rajni kanakkaye nee Sreebhoovilasthira asamshayaminnu ninteyabhootiyengu punarengu kidappitorthaal

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Merna Ibrahim 14 November 2010

Through these simple lines, you are discussing an important case and sending an important message..I hope people would think before doing anything! ! .God bless you dear :) 10++

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Ken E Hall 27 April 2010

Now your 16 little flower and I feel happy for you.....magic kind regards

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 October 2009

Great poem…lithe and love for Nature. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Please read / comment on my poems: Checkmate [In Elite 500] Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] or other poems niv

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Pandian Angelina 11 July 2009

You can fit this poem into many layers of thinking. Very good thinking and a simple everyday simile to drive home the point well. Angel

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premji premji 27 June 2009

aishu, i read this earlier...but it makes me remember the lines of basheer....vaikom muhammed basheer... he asks: what have you done with that rose flower, gifted you. 'just crushed it by my foot': she says.... he replies: it was my heart!

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Brandon Febles 02 June 2009

I love this poem the way it expresses beauty And how it should be Cherish, To me If you cherish beauty in small things like a flower, or a shade of a person eye color, finding it in bigger things is simpler. Which makes life beautiful every day.

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Rayjean Carter 29 May 2009

this is a very emotional poem. it's foreshadowing and desiring for the truth. great job! : D

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Jester's P 12 May 2009

poetry is a tool to convey a 'feeling' - the truth and reality that 'man' is an emotional creature...the words in your poem is simple yet touching the man's nature, and man and its nature. however, its not a question to know what is birth nor what is death, but it is a journey to understand the meaning the what is between them...just like in your poem 'the flower that blooms in the morning is the samr flower that will wither in the evening. all the best in your poetry let us cvontinue its legacy.

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C. P. Sharma 29 April 2009

Oceanic thought of a feeling heart. CP

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Caterpillar MC 28 April 2009

A very meaningful poem.....simple words, great thought....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 April 2009

Amazing, bravo....

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I like the grammar and the irony rather the truth about human beings who careless about nature. Beautiful piece indeed.

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Shreya Chatterjee 07 April 2009

very well written little girl. as for me, presently I am suffering from writers' block, so can not contribute. with love and lots of support shreya.

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Max Robertson 02 April 2009

I got to say, i think its quite powerful and moving in its words. It makes me feel guilty, but in a good way haha. Nice work. read my new poem 'straight and simple' and comment. Hope to talk to you soon Max

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AISWARYA T ANISH

AISWARYA T ANISH

KARUNAGAPPALLY, MANGALAM, KERALA, INDIA
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